Deep under the Warmth of that Blanket

Deep Under the warmth of that blanket

Deep under the warmth of that blanket - poem

On that foggy winter morning,
Deep under the warmth of that blanket,
When you Whispered into my ear,
Lying on the left shoulder,
Where you would sleep for long hours,
You owned a part of me,
A part of me became Yours forever,
If I would have been a piece of land,
Then this shoulder would have been,
On your name,
Deep under the warmth of that blanket…

When you shared all the secrets,
When you bared your soul,
When no inhibitions were left,
You made me your own,
I know you don’t want to remember that moment,
You felt trapped in my words,
You felt weak wrapped in my shoulders,
That’s my loss, that’s my failure,
Deep under the warmth of that blanket…

But trust me,
There was no web,
There was no trap,
I was weak too,
I felt trapped too,
Up until that moment,
When you became mine,
And I became yours,
It was love that trapped both of us,
It was the universe that tricked us,
It was a conspiracy of the creator,
Deep under the warmth of that blanket…

Just remember,
You don’t have to stay,
Any moment you can walk away,
I will not complain,
I will never stop,
No matter how much it may pain,
Will just keep lying there,
Waiting for you,
Counting my last in your fragrance,
Deep under the warmth of that blanket…

You might be forty,
I might be thirty-five,
I might be thirty,
You might be twenty-five,
How does that even matter,
Does love age,
Does love has an age,
And even if it has,
It is just born,
And will outlive us all,
Deep under the warmth of that blanket…

The lines of our fortune,
Are like the ripples of the Bedsheet,
that we are lying on,
They will go away,
The moment we get up,
From this fairy sleep,
And we will together create,
Our lines of fortune,
Deep under the warmth of that blanket…

Manas ‘Sameer’ Mukul

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30 Responses

  1. This is so beautiful.. and you say i am not a poet. Loved every word

  2. Pr@Gun says:

    That’s really cute & filled with so much love… Your poetries are heartwarming… Always

    • Manas Mukul says:

      Thank you so much. You have been a constant support whether I post it on insta or blog or even just like that. Thanks for keeping the faith in my words. Keep motivating. Means a lot.

  3. Monse Ramirez says:

    Wow! Such a heartfelt inspiration. Enjoyed reading ur poem.

    • Manas Mukul says:

      Thank you so much for visiting and appreciating. This is really a great surprise to see you here 😊👍🏼🤗

  4. soniadogra says:

    What a heartfelt poem. You’re a love poet, uh! The last stanza 👌👌

  5. Ruchi says:

    It’s like a love lost poet ! Why are your poems so sad ?

  6. Shalzz says:

    Ah, so beautiful. I cold actually envision the whole thing in my head. And I guess, that is where the success of a poet is? My favorite line would be – does love age, does true love have an age! 🙂

  7. Rashi Roy says:

    This was beautiful. The emotions have come out in the purest form. The choice of words, the flow, the feeling, everything is just perfect. Keep writing these straight from the heart poems.

    • Manas Mukul says:

      This is the best part about remaining single…the emotions remain pure…haha…just kidding. Thank you so much for loving it and being such a constant support. Cheers. hugs.

  8. Lovely poem and the oozing out of feelings made it really heartfelt. The longing & the solitude shades were deeply embedded in the beautiful poem and it resonated all the heartfelt emotions. Manasji , keep creating more such moving & sentimental pieces!!

    • Manas Mukul says:

      I am glad you could relate to the underlying emotions. Thank you so much for appreciating it. Means a lot.

  9. jayanthi6 says:

    Wow, Manas…I never knew you were such a wonderful poet…lovely read!

    • Manas Mukul says:

      I still don’t consider myself as one. Thank you so much for your kind appreciation. Means a lot 😊👍🏼

  10. Ashvini Naik says:

    What mind-blowing & touching poetry this is, Manas. You’re an extra0rdinary player of words who uses the simplest of words to convey the most complex emotions like nobody.

    • Manas Mukul says:

      Thank you so very much for these lovely words. That’s what I try to achieve with my limited skills and vocabulary to somehow find a connect with the readers. These words are super motivating. 😊🤗👍🏼

  11. Poonam says:

    And every one deserves to be with someone trapped in love. Such a beautiful poem Manas

    • Manas Mukul says:

      True… Everyone deserve that… Some are lucky some aren’t. Thank you so much for appreciating the poem Poonam ji. Means a lot 😊👍🏼

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